Is it alright ? Cannonball solo attached

[shauli]

hi guys let me know what do you think about this attached partial solo transcrip. of Cannonball Adderley from "Freddie Freeloader" (Kind of Blue). ITS WRITTEN for Eb tuned (alto...) .

Id LOVE to know my wrongs, if its accurate enough for anyone to understand....

sorry about the quality...but you can read it.

here is the link :

http://briefcase.walla.co.il/data/e/...9730/solo2.gif

thanks!