Multitonic Samba

[primetime]

Here's my first try at composing a song using a multitonic system. It uses a minor 3rd root motion, going from C major, to Eb major, to Gb major, and then eventually to A major. It's relatively fast, and I like the melody...Solo could've been better, but then again, when can't they. I hope you all enjoy it, it's the track titled General Tso's Revenge

Here's the link (http://myspace.com/maxonthesax)

(If you'd like a copy of the lead sheet, just let me know, I can get one to you.)

[rcwjd]

Max
I liked the tune. When you jumped in after the brief intro it had a nice sound to it with a quick bebop scale. Around toward 2.5 minutes I was kind of ready for a bridge or some type of modulation - maybe up a fourth or something. But then I am more a slave to more form. :D

[primetime]

Thanks Richard - Now that you say that, a modulation would be nice, maybe for the last head, or even just the last chorus. I'd also like to "beef up" the intro a little, and leave a bit of room to stretch out. Thanks for listening!